@1graber2 , if we are getting technical it is a "review", not a paragraph .
@erik_squires, the part you posted was a portion of a paragraph. Now that we have cleared that up.... not sure you would want an editor, as they would suggest edits and you may or may not want to take that advice.
@elizabeth, thank you. I thought the part left out changed things quite a bit too but I guess when one takes the time to read the entire paragraph, article, review or whatever and considers all the information vs. skewing it the way one wants to read it then it isn't as fun for some. Again, thanks.
@erik_squires, the part you posted was a portion of a paragraph. Now that we have cleared that up.... not sure you would want an editor, as they would suggest edits and you may or may not want to take that advice.
@elizabeth, thank you. I thought the part left out changed things quite a bit too but I guess when one takes the time to read the entire paragraph, article, review or whatever and considers all the information vs. skewing it the way one wants to read it then it isn't as fun for some. Again, thanks.